2020年考研英语一作文预测:建议信
参考范文
To Whom It May Concern,
As a student at our university, I should first commend you for the additional computers that you have recently added to the computer rooms. I am writing to you to request that the Internet be installed in the dormitories.
As you know, the World Wide Web has become an increasingly more important tool at university. Not only do professors require students to use the Internet for research, but much communication is done between professors and students through email as well. In addition, some professors are beginning to post their lecture notes online for students to review in their own time.
While there are a few computer labs with Internet access throughout campus, with over 20,000 students living in the dorms, there is a great need for more Internet access areas. Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
致有关人士:
作为本校的一名大学生,首先很赞赏您最近为机房另外配置电脑的行动。我写信给您恳请在宿舍里安装互联网。
想必您也知道,互联网已经变成大学生活中很重要的一种工具。教授们不仅要求学生们使用网络进行科研调查,而且教授和学生间的联系很多也是通过邮件完成的。此外,有些教授将自己的课堂笔记放在网上,供学生们空闲时复习。
整个学校配备网络的机房里电脑台数很少,而大约有两万名学生生活在宿舍里,所以宿舍对网络的接入具有很大的需求。谢谢您抽时间阅读我的邮件。
您真诚的,
李明
亮点词汇
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点评
建议信即对收信人就某一问题提出忠告或建议,有可能写给某个组织或机构,就其改进服务质量提出建议或忠告;也可能写给个人,就其人生中的某个重大决定或小事提出自己的看法和观点。需注意建议信并非投诉信,观点务必合情合理,语气一定礼貌当先。考研写作已经七次考察建议信:2007(致图书馆)、2008(致房东)、2009(致编辑)、2011英语(二)(致表弟)、2012英语(一)(致留学生)、2014英语(一)(致校长)、2016英语(二)(致朋友)。
经典句型
1、You have asked me for my advice with regard to…, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.您问我关于…的建议,我想试图做出一些有用的建议。
2、I hope you will find these recommendations practical.我希望您发现这些建议有用。
3、I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.我很高兴看到这方面的改进。